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Source
love isn’t source however powerful It be
time isn’t source no matter what it sets free seed is sewn in a fertile damp moist hole
words planted like songs in ears
the ground spreads no fears
stream flows hard and gush
source plunged deep mighty thrust
the valley is lit with warmth’s brilliant rays
as source goes deep into its clay
colors emerge spouting screaming sounds mountains watch looking down
powerful aromas trembling earth
source explodes amazing girth
ground is open the stars burst
source quenches it’s thirst
rhythm flow nature takes its course
source goes deep no remorse
time isn’t source no matter what it sets free seed is sewn in a fertile damp moist hole
words planted like songs in ears
the ground spreads no fears
stream flows hard and gush
source plunged deep mighty thrust
the valley is lit with warmth’s brilliant rays
as source goes deep into its clay
colors emerge spouting screaming sounds mountains watch looking down
powerful aromas trembling earth
source explodes amazing girth
ground is open the stars burst
source quenches it’s thirst
rhythm flow nature takes its course
source goes deep no remorse
Published 4th Jun 2019
| Edited 22nd Aug 2019
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4th Jun 2019 8:16am
Very suggestive (can see the act of penetration and ejaculation being described - 'a seed is sown in a fertile moist dark hole').
Could read easier on the eye if lines break where a rhyming word comes in.
Could read easier on the eye if lines break where a rhyming word comes in.
5th Jun 2019 2:33am
5th Jun 2019 8:58pm
Agree with S_S as to be broken in to line or stanzas to improve readability.
Welcome to the Deep Under...……….
Welcome to the Deep Under...……….
5th Jun 2019 10:27pm
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