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Caught up in wanting you

Wanting to touch you  
But not just to touch you
 
Wanting to hug you
But not just to hug you
 
Wanting to feel you  
But not just to feel you
 
Wanting to kiss you
But not just to kiss you
 
Wanting you
Just to want you
 
Picturesque plateau of the Phantoms folly
Fire-blackened walls of jubilant jolly
 
Deaf to ears, the mind does not listen
Suffocated with your candescent kisses  
 
Hook to reel, body as your bait
Smothered with steamy sessions that tantalising tongue creates
 
Your propensity to shut me out is staggering how does one requite?  
I surrender, hopeless, I cannot win this fight
 
Dazzle me, Darling
Missing you, Dear
Dance with me, Honey
Stay near and Fade with me, h e r e
 
On a ride I stay on,such a (fixated) Fool
Needing a hefty knife to cut away this (domineering) Dude
Jordanne
Written by Jordanne (RubixCube)
Published | Edited 10th Dec 2011
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