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Cloud
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Cloud
I lived on a cloud,
'till I came crashing down.
But I've seen myself fly,
so I'll keep fighting 'till I die.
Written by
ThroughTheVeil
Published
30th May 2019
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#determination
#healing
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
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JAZZMANOR
31st May 2019 4:33am
Brevity in the past tense vs. the present tense!
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Josh
(Joshua Bond)
31st May 2019 10:47pm
Nicely penned in such succinct words; once you've experienced flying it serves as a forever motivation to get back up there. I guess it's part of what makes us human.
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