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Person A gets to do That to Person B and Person B gets to do That to Person A, Isn't that Grand?!
I want to put my antibacterial digestive mouth-enzyme
all over the place you pee out of
Is that too much to ask?
............
I want to press my mouth on your face
won't that be good for you?
It'll be good for me,
but won't it be good for you?
You can do that to me,
won't it be good for you?
..............
You see what's happening here
Person A gets to put their hands and mouth fluid
All over person B and person B
Gets to put their hands and mouth fluid all over
Person A
Yay yay yay for our divinely pressing need
To press our mouths against each other
Again ' gain 'gain!
............................
slip, taste, fool darn slicky tongue
squint gasp, spring tips eternal branches
nub and reds and bumpy stretch, fuzz hinters
the meat's swallow let me down and pushy wallow
collapsed mountainside impossible-still ceiling speaking
why the night so always forever for our repeating port
and quiet dawn-blue chirping, drape breeze shiver
so always similar so needed so never-enough
never-complete, done but must-be-done-again
quench success, confidence, fade return of drabness forgetful
longing, stress and panicked not perfect, nothing working,
I suck, I must, it's so stupid, so stupidly dumb but correct,
why o why o why, you had something, but after, is lost
Why Form doth needing Constant Recognicience?
Why can't Once be Etern'd Sufficience?
all over the place you pee out of
Is that too much to ask?
............
I want to press my mouth on your face
won't that be good for you?
It'll be good for me,
but won't it be good for you?
You can do that to me,
won't it be good for you?
..............
You see what's happening here
Person A gets to put their hands and mouth fluid
All over person B and person B
Gets to put their hands and mouth fluid all over
Person A
Yay yay yay for our divinely pressing need
To press our mouths against each other
Again ' gain 'gain!
............................
slip, taste, fool darn slicky tongue
squint gasp, spring tips eternal branches
nub and reds and bumpy stretch, fuzz hinters
the meat's swallow let me down and pushy wallow
collapsed mountainside impossible-still ceiling speaking
why the night so always forever for our repeating port
and quiet dawn-blue chirping, drape breeze shiver
so always similar so needed so never-enough
never-complete, done but must-be-done-again
quench success, confidence, fade return of drabness forgetful
longing, stress and panicked not perfect, nothing working,
I suck, I must, it's so stupid, so stupidly dumb but correct,
why o why o why, you had something, but after, is lost
Why Form doth needing Constant Recognicience?
Why can't Once be Etern'd Sufficience?
Published 29th May 2019
| Edited 23rd Nov 2022
Author's Note
poetibiologirealorgasminism the spit of it all
*Nov22: Had this in hidden tab, didn't really like drunk(?) edit composed in '19. The phrasings now submitted are close to the originals often giddily rolling about my noggs upon walks through the nonsense and remembrances of it all, that most necessary nonsense that we all are so driven to feel the Full Purpose of Life, perhaps sad for those of life who never get - but something is gotten of Life, perhaps, non?
Then a last attempt of an Erotic w Spiritual.
38 characters left, no 10 now, beers' run out, have to pee.
*Original Posting, Edit May 2019:
Oh Goddess Dammit
How I want to constantly placate
my anti-bacterial digestive mouth-enzyme
all over and around the place
you pass urination from
*Nov22: Had this in hidden tab, didn't really like drunk(?) edit composed in '19. The phrasings now submitted are close to the originals often giddily rolling about my noggs upon walks through the nonsense and remembrances of it all, that most necessary nonsense that we all are so driven to feel the Full Purpose of Life, perhaps sad for those of life who never get - but something is gotten of Life, perhaps, non?
Then a last attempt of an Erotic w Spiritual.
38 characters left, no 10 now, beers' run out, have to pee.
*Original Posting, Edit May 2019:
Oh Goddess Dammit
How I want to constantly placate
my anti-bacterial digestive mouth-enzyme
all over and around the place
you pass urination from
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29th May 2019 3:53pm
Okay okay okay, one should follow the proper social standard of never speaking on the internet while intoxicatedly drunken. Although I stand by my prior statement expressed above, and will not retract, I will apologize to the DUP Erotic Community for the most terrible action of placing this rank vomitous excuse of a "poem" in the Erotic category! It is the absolute truth that at the time of posting, that it was in my thought processes, as rather non-existent as they were at the time, to post it under the Upbeat section instead. I was intending to go back and modify such placement, but it appears the stupoured carelessness of brain-repair dormancy took over.
Looking this situation over at the later time, with barely refreshed eye, muscle and digestion capabilities, I have decided to place such shod in the gutter troughs of miscellany instead! Even the DUpbeat community has fine standards too, and shall not have to be embarrassed by my unwelcome crass of entry into their establishment, nor forced into any exhaustion of mopping clean their lobby floors of my boot mud after I've left town!
Again, to the DUP Erotic Community, which must always remain gleaming in its' shower drips of fine tongue and epidermal divinity, please accept my formal apology. It is still on the personal to-do list to compose a proper Erotic Poem onto the DUP Platform, and egregious judgement errors as this past posting fortify such resolve to get onto track for that.
Looking this situation over at the later time, with barely refreshed eye, muscle and digestion capabilities, I have decided to place such shod in the gutter troughs of miscellany instead! Even the DUpbeat community has fine standards too, and shall not have to be embarrassed by my unwelcome crass of entry into their establishment, nor forced into any exhaustion of mopping clean their lobby floors of my boot mud after I've left town!
Again, to the DUP Erotic Community, which must always remain gleaming in its' shower drips of fine tongue and epidermal divinity, please accept my formal apology. It is still on the personal to-do list to compose a proper Erotic Poem onto the DUP Platform, and egregious judgement errors as this past posting fortify such resolve to get onto track for that.
