every time you write about writing i want to tear you apart

The metaphoric thread in this is gutted so subtly until the end, anna, when the intestines spill and the kill is apparent.  I particularly enjoyed the double-entendre of  'rub it in' . I imagine blackened seasoning if you're going to sear it blue.

so did i

thank you very much for your stamp of approval x

damn it beautiful Anna love the intensity of this poem
searing heat throughout...

love Brenda ❤

thank you beautiful

i KNOW, strange, right?

still figuring ( getting round to )  your thing x

i normally hate poems about poems but sometimes I make an extreme exception

this is my poem...

you are right x

thanks, Beautiful❤

You're not the only one, splendiferous in wonder or is it my stomach howling?

Agreed

instead of always explaining/describing how you feel, sometimes it can be twice as powerful just to show it/express it more objectively. maybe not my place to say rn, cos I'm currently slightly fucked up, but they were my immediate thoughts after reading; to remember each reader has their own paths that create their own images. therefore it's the writer's job to allow enough universality for the reader to develop enough imagery to become involved enough, idk

i get what u mean, but I don't get where u pulled it from in this one

i do know that it doesn't do justice to her poetry

Perfect! I just read a poem about you, and now you're real! Holy shite. Wonderous write, my dear♥

whos been writing about me now? very grateful you stopped by to cross reference x

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/349596-anna-grin/

Of course! I was just shocked the writer wasn’t bullshitting on the existence of you!

wowee. Ricky. that's a throwback

what to do about little pickle ricky

Totally tight freaking piece

thank you x