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The Plum Rains
Get caught between rains
Finding shelters just in vain
Drench deep to the veins
Published 28th May 2019
| Edited 3rd Oct 2019
Author's Note
Wet everywhere...
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28th May 2019 4:52am
28th May 2019 6:19am
Thank you Daniel for the read. Always appreciate your kind words.
Love
Jasmine
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Jasmine
28th May 2019 4:55am
Pretty wet words....makes me want to swim in the stream of thought...
love
Jeff
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Jeff
28th May 2019 6:22am
28th May 2019 7:20am
Brava Rose! I have a loved one who has experienced first hand and often the heavy rain in Taiwan. You describe it perfectly.
28th May 2019 2:58pm
Dear Bob, the rains are so unpredictable and heavy that they often cause
serious flooding in lots of places.
Thank you for the read and the nice feedback.
Love
Jasmine
serious flooding in lots of places.
Thank you for the read and the nice feedback.
Love
Jasmine
28th May 2019 3:56pm
RJ short and evokes the complete image of "getting caught in the rain", very nicely done.
28th May 2019 4:23pm
29th May 2019 3:30am
29th May 2019 12:33pm
Hey dear Lawrence, glad to have your read. It has been a while since your last commented on mine.
Love
Jasmine
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Jasmine
13th Jun 2019 2:22am
14th Jun 2019 5:31pm
Thank you so much for the read my friend.
Your comment made me smile.
Love
Jasmine
Your comment made me smile.
Love
Jasmine
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8th Jul 2019 10:30pm
3rd Oct 2019 00:58am
sweet the rain that will stop after you find a place to hide
like this write
like this write
3rd Oct 2019 1:07am
18th Oct 2019 10:09pm
A super lovely poem that drenches us with poetic words and rainy day feeling wow. Kudos for a great poem in brevity.
Nice to read from u again, take care pal.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts on my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
Nice to read from u again, take care pal.
Pls pleez do comment/ write down your thoughts on my newest poem too. Without such thought exchange interaction we would be in monologue merely.
3rd Nov 2019 1:53pm
Thank you, my friend. Of course, I always would love to read yours.
Love
Jasmine
Love
Jasmine
3rd Nov 2019 1:34pm
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14th Jan 2020 3:45am
Thank you for your kindness.
I just experienced an unprecedented horrifying presidential election and the candidate I supported lost.
Trying to calm myself down.
Jasmine
I just experienced an unprecedented horrifying presidential election and the candidate I supported lost.
Trying to calm myself down.
Jasmine
14th Jan 2020 3:50am
I am so, so sorry to hear this, Jasmine :(
I am here if you need support... maybe read some beautiful poems on here? Perhaps something positive and uplifting!
I am here if you need support... maybe read some beautiful poems on here? Perhaps something positive and uplifting!
14th Jan 2020 3:55am
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