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In Deep
I was lost, but now I'm found
A few feet down
Deep Underground
My soul and mind
Might yet roam
But this may last
More than suffice
As my idea
Of Paradise.
A few feet down
Deep Underground
My soul and mind
Might yet roam
But this may last
More than suffice
As my idea
Of Paradise.
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27th May 2019 6:45pm
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Re: Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 7:04pm
Re. In Deep
Anonymous
27th May 2019 6:50pm
Welcome back brother. I hope you are doing better. We are all lost. But, praise God, sometimes we are found. This place is empty without you. Hugs my friend.
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Re: Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 7:06pm
Glad to have a place here. Thank you J! I will continue to write when health allows.
Re: Re. In Deep
Anonymous
27th May 2019 7:17pm
Of course my friend. Health always comes first. I hope you are doing better.
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Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 6:58pm
Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:29pm
Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 7:18pm
Re: Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 8:09pm
And I'm delighted to be back, among talent such as yours. I just hope I can manage more with some regularity Thank you for the RL inclusion, dearest Brenda!
Re. In Deep
Anonymous
27th May 2019 8:18pm
So very happy you are back. Big big hugs.
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:30pm
Re. In Deep
Anonymous
27th May 2019 8:22pm
so so so so so so soooooooooooooooo happy that you're back & writing again
hope youre feeling better, mister crow
xo
hope youre feeling better, mister crow
xo
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:32pm
Thank you, shadoe! I hope I can keep up the writing on an at least a somewhat regular basis.
Re. In Deep
27th May 2019 11:15pm
Oh, crow , I'm so happy to see you back!! I hope you're feeling better too. I was out a little while myself & never check my pm's regularly so I missed Jade's message til long after. It's so damn good to have you back ...
This👉 " I was lost, but now I'm found "
"As my idea
Of Paradise."
...that's the Underground & how I felt when I returned!!!❤
This👉 " I was lost, but now I'm found "
"As my idea
Of Paradise."
...that's the Underground & how I felt when I returned!!!❤
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:35pm
It is a home, and a comfort. That's the Paradise with which I am familiar. Thank you Pandora!
Re. In Deep
Anonymous
28th May 2019 00:00am
My Lovely Sir Crow - happy to see your words again - there have been several of us not feeling ourselves for one reason or another and have been away and popping in every now and then...glad when I popped this time, I saw you listed in my updates! I’ll be in touch! I love you! With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:38pm
I look forward to staying in touch. I believe we have some catching up to do. The craziness where I live is just one of many examples. Thank you Taryn!
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28th May 2019 00:23am
Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:39pm
I still have a ways to go, but here I am, hopefully to stay on at least a somewhat regular basis. I will certainly try. Thank you!
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28th May 2019 3:27am
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28th May 2019 10:41pm
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Anonymous
28th May 2019 7:55am
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:43pm
Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 12:36pm
I was on the point of wondering if it was the right thing to do to send you a PM checking you were o.k. My 'don't-make-assumptions' voice kicked in, so I held back a few more days but I am so glad to see your ink again. Josh.
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Re: Re. In Deep
28th May 2019 10:44pm
Thank you Josh. This means a lot to me, coming from one of the poets I respect the most here.