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THE SWEET WHIP

You crack the sweet whip
against my throat, dear vodka
in my lemonade

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 25th May 2019

#alcohol #haiku

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Re. THE SWEET WHIP

25th May 2019 5:37pm

I really enjoyed this one
it reminded me of what I think of when I smoke
it's the bite on my lungs I enjoy...

great ink...

love Brenda 💕

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25th May 2019 5:49pm

Such a pleasure to imbibe your words, Brenda. Thank you.

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Re. THE SWEET WHIP

25th May 2019 9:17pm

Indeed, liquid spud does kinda hurt the tonsils.

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