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Raven
I'm not narcissistic but my alter ego is
Raven is a bitch
I come to her when I don't want to give a fuck
my heart aches but not hers
I put her on like old leathers
she fits just right where it hurts
she gives me a thicker skin
so when I bite tarmac I get up and keep walking
I tell you she's bad ass
she finger fucks societal niceties
she's cunt first in this institution
after all us bitches got to stick together
she knows the source of my pain
but she ain't telling...she's no fucking snitch
she'll gladly do time for me in emotional lockup
when the feelings police come looking for me
she plays me so well--
I can barely tell the difference now between her and I
she is the truth of me you just can't handle
I'm telling you son
I let her act out and gladly take all the blame
people don't get her but I do
so when she comes forward I get all mouthy
letting loose with repressed feelings
after all she has a lot to fucking say
doing hard time in the penitentiary of Crimsin
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Re. Raven
Anonymous
24th May 2019 7:00pm
``doing hard time in the penitentiary of Crimsin`` ...fucking epic!

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Re: Re. Raven
24th May 2019 7:30pm
thank you graciously my beautiful Queen I'm happy you liked that line I did too...
love you lady...
love Raven, Brenda or whoever the hell I am ❤
love you lady...
love Raven, Brenda or whoever the hell I am ❤
Re. Raven
24th May 2019 7:07pm
Re: Re. Raven
24th May 2019 7:31pm
Re. Raven
Anonymous
24th May 2019 7:50pm
I'm starting to get the reason of the "other" alter ego. I can't bring myself to doing it. But you are divine, sweet one, as usual! "she finger fucks societal niceties she's cunt first in this institution after all us bitches got to stick together". Fantastic!

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Re: Re. Raven
24th May 2019 8:10pm
thank you graciously dearest Juvenalis for loving this side of me as well... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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24th May 2019 8:10pm
Re. Raven
25th May 2019 2:03am
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26th May 2019 7:04pm
Re. Raven
26th May 2019 10:47pm
she finger fucks societal niceties
she's cunt first in this institution
after all us bitches got to stick together
i know i shouldn't but i absolutely love when you go bad ass! very empowering ink miss!
she's cunt first in this institution
after all us bitches got to stick together
i know i shouldn't but i absolutely love when you go bad ass! very empowering ink miss!
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Re: Re. Raven
26th May 2019 11:25pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jen you made my day lovely lady...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. Raven
27th May 2019 2:18am
Crimson, Raven; whoever you are @ the moment or any given time, I love ya!❤
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27th May 2019 7:21pm
Re. Raven
8th Jul 2019 11:10am
Raven rocks she tells it as it is, simple fact is she may be doing time in penitentiary of Crimsin but love you both
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Re. Raven
14th Oct 2019 9:28am
I do love it when I come across poetry that is able to beautify profanity and in all it's true rawness, yet still with a message and moment to share. A tool not all poets have in their tool chest. I too have a friend that always arrives in perfect timing when I need her to..... one of my loved personalities and quite the fierce female. Thank you for sharing. Aloha
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Re: Re. Raven
14th Oct 2019 9:34am
thank you beautiful poetess you brightened my night...I really appreciate the love on this write...yes we are who we need to be when the time comes it feels good to find one who understands...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. Raven
14th Oct 2019 9:39am
thank you beautiful poetess from both my personas... I think I need one for my angry side too so Crim and Raven stay out of trouble...
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