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Meh
I am just a hole
Something warm to jerk you off
Whatever, good night
Something warm to jerk you off
Whatever, good night
Author's Note
Oh, lighten up, folks. Sometimes it ain't all rainbows and orgasms. So what?!
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Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 1:44pm
Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 1:17pm
Oh. But. But. But. You’re more than just a hole... aren’t you ?!
Fuck, if that’s how married women feel, I never wanna get married ! Um. Fuck that BS.
Hugs to you... 🌹💙
Fuck, if that’s how married women feel, I never wanna get married ! Um. Fuck that BS.
Hugs to you... 🌹💙
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Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 1:43pm
Sigh. Of course I am more. And I appreciate the hugs, but I'm fine.
Have you ever given anyone a great backrub? Did you get anything out of it? (Assuming you aren't a massage therapist and getting paid...) Did you have even a fleeting moment of thinking "damn, my hands are tired"?
These 3 lines represent a miniscule moment of my entire wonderful married sex life. I'm hoping the married folks will get my humour.... sorry if you found it alarming.
Snuggly hugs back atcha. ❤
Have you ever given anyone a great backrub? Did you get anything out of it? (Assuming you aren't a massage therapist and getting paid...) Did you have even a fleeting moment of thinking "damn, my hands are tired"?
These 3 lines represent a miniscule moment of my entire wonderful married sex life. I'm hoping the married folks will get my humour.... sorry if you found it alarming.
Snuggly hugs back atcha. ❤
Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 5:42pm
As someone who loves my wife dearly, at the same time both of us have exactly zero problem knowing what it's like to feel unappreciated at times. It's impossible not to, I think, when you are literally partnered with someone for potentially ever.
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Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 1:48pm
Good honest soul bearing write.
That's what poets must do.
With that said, you need read him this poem, than tell him to start making love instead of just using you for a quick screw.
That's what poets must do.
With that said, you need read him this poem, than tell him to start making love instead of just using you for a quick screw.
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Re: Re. Meh
Ah, trust me, he needs no further instruction! Perhaps the reason I wrote about this is because it was the exception, not the rule. The parameters of the end-of-day quickie are pretty clear....I could just as easily have said no.
Thanks for valuing the honesty in this.
Thanks for valuing the honesty in this.
Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 4:05pm
ha!!!...every night can't be raw balls to the wall passionate sweat stained transcendent sex....
some nights are gonna be a couple of humps and back to our regularly scheduled program
some nights are gonna be a couple of humps and back to our regularly scheduled program
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Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 5:25pm
LOL, thank you for that! Coming from the writer of sumptuous erotic poetry, that's saying something - like maybe I'm not crazy or whatever....!
Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 5:43pm
Oh you're crazy, but not in a way that should be judged as anything but good ol' eccentric artist fodder :)
(in other words, crazy like the rest of us)
(in other words, crazy like the rest of us)
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Re: Re. Meh
23rd May 2019 6:34pm
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24th May 2019 1:36am