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Worth Is In The Feel
Cool grass dampens my feet
green, it's the new gold
displaying a discovery untold
as fescue tickles my roots
worth is in the feel
and I feel
kindred in heart and spirit,
alive in thought and music
beat after beat
some new, some repeating
but I can't get you out of my head
so I float, and I fly
I open my eyes
to the beauty beyond
as we serpentine
off in the wind
green, it's the new gold
displaying a discovery untold
as fescue tickles my roots
worth is in the feel
and I feel
kindred in heart and spirit,
alive in thought and music
beat after beat
some new, some repeating
but I can't get you out of my head
so I float, and I fly
I open my eyes
to the beauty beyond
as we serpentine
off in the wind
Published 22nd May 2019
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22nd May 2019 4:47pm
Whoa! Wonderful, Tim! It's indicative of the initial stages of love, where our feet never touch the ground.
I know you're looking for friendly feedback, but I would definitely comma after some new[,] some repeating.
I know you're looking for friendly feedback, but I would definitely comma after some new[,] some repeating.
22nd May 2019 5:06pm
Thanks A, great minds as I was thinking that after posting but got sidetracked 😊
22nd May 2019 6:00pm
22nd May 2019 6:22pm
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
22nd May 2019 8:15pm
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22nd May 2019 8:16pm
23rd May 2019 4:07am
Yes, the worth is weighted in our feelings, that’s for sure !
Thanks kindly for sharing yours ~ 🔥🔥🔥
Thanks kindly for sharing yours ~ 🔥🔥🔥
23rd May 2019 4:49pm
