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Surrender

Sir...
I want you so bad
It hurts
Deep deep down
Yearns a feeling
I burn
Shake and tremble
And I want your nectar
To seep within me
Brand me over and over
Deliciously force surrender
I'm yours
For whatever
Just take this hurt
Whip and churn
This fire
Until I burn
Sir, please
Release me.
BabydoII
Written by BabydoII (Itty Bitty)
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