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The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
Venomous tirade
Gushes from a bitter tongue
A heart full of hate
I pity such lonely souls
Wallowing in misery
Are they so unloved
That their hearts bleed and oozes
Poisonous vile
It must be lonely out there
With nobody to hold them
They must be living
An empty life so wanting
Of love pure and true
Not the love that comes from lust
That feeds their carnal desires
I'm thankful, lucky
I have more than enough love
To give and receive
I don't have to be bitter
Nor envy what others have
Peace and contentment
Don't come easy they take time
To happen in ones life
They only come when you have
Stripped yourself of vanity
Pride, ego, conceit
They just fuel arrogance
Breeds toxicity
No flowers can bloom and grow
In such hearts full of darkness
Gushes from a bitter tongue
A heart full of hate
I pity such lonely souls
Wallowing in misery
Are they so unloved
That their hearts bleed and oozes
Poisonous vile
It must be lonely out there
With nobody to hold them
They must be living
An empty life so wanting
Of love pure and true
Not the love that comes from lust
That feeds their carnal desires
I'm thankful, lucky
I have more than enough love
To give and receive
I don't have to be bitter
Nor envy what others have
Peace and contentment
Don't come easy they take time
To happen in ones life
They only come when you have
Stripped yourself of vanity
Pride, ego, conceit
They just fuel arrogance
Breeds toxicity
No flowers can bloom and grow
In such hearts full of darkness
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16th May 2019 6:51am
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16th May 2019 7:00am
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16th May 2019 8:27am
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Re. The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
16th May 2019 12:18pm
This is a beautiful entry and much needed on this site
Anyone can post venom but not everyone can post the miraculous
Well Done
Anyone can post venom but not everyone can post the miraculous
Well Done
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16th May 2019 12:27pm
Re. The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
16th May 2019 1:48pm
Excellent string of Tanka Summerrain... each one holds truth and wisdom... very well delivered
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16th May 2019 2:07pm
Re. The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
16th May 2019 4:01pm
The human experience usually offers us the full range to come to terms with - and exit with a softened heart.
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Re: Re. The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
16th May 2019 4:38pm
You are right Josh. Unfortunately not all comes out with a softened heart. Thank you for your comment.
Re. The Lack Of Love ( String of Tanka)
Great work! I love everything about it and it's going straight to my reading list!
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16th May 2019 10:02pm
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16th May 2019 10:11pm
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