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Boom
She can't see her shine
Her feelings always intertwine
Making her feel alone and confined
She can be happy,
Hell she can even be fine
But her Emotions are like walking on a battle Field
Waiting to hit a mine.
Her feelings always intertwine
Making her feel alone and confined
She can be happy,
Hell she can even be fine
But her Emotions are like walking on a battle Field
Waiting to hit a mine.
Published 15th May 2019
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15th May 2019 10:04pm
That rattlles off the tongue really nicely - with an explosive undertow, capturing the feeling of suppressed anger waiting to be triggered big time.
15th May 2019 11:07pm
