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Hook
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Hook
~
i can see the sun
sinking, into the pool of your eyes
and i want to bring it back
and make it shine
~
Written by
_Ani_
Published
15th May 2019
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Re. Hook
Ahavati
15th May 2019 4:04am
There are so many ways to take this - but the Universal is separation of a relationship, be it through death or an alternative breakup/separation.
You have a lovely way of capturing the essence of something.
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_Ani_
15th May 2019 4:06am
Thank you, I appreciate that. :)
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Re. Hook
I_IS_ME
15th May 2019 4:45am
Beware of what you revive. Deep piece, short with many meanings. Could also be a great dark piece
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Re: Re. Hook
_Ani_
16th May 2019 1:02am
Thank you so much. :)
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
15th May 2019 1:11pm
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Re: Re. Hook
_Ani_
16th May 2019 1:02am
Thank you Mystical Rose :)
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