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As Salt Cures the Heart
thundering surf pounding the sand
the sea's passion as it kisses the shore
with a ferocity that takes my breath away
nature's percussion
the heartbeat of God
you're still the one
after all these years
hiding your thoughts beneath those Vaurnets
your grin giving you away
I can see every wicked thought as it traipses
across your mind
the slight adjustment to the way you are sitting
I catch you staring
you don't even realize you are smiling
so pull me close lover
as the sun warms my skin
so you warm my soul
whisper your desires into my ear
take my hand as you hold my heart
what God joined together
let no man part
As yesterday, as today and forever Beloved
the sea's passion as it kisses the shore
with a ferocity that takes my breath away
nature's percussion
the heartbeat of God
you're still the one
after all these years
hiding your thoughts beneath those Vaurnets
your grin giving you away
I can see every wicked thought as it traipses
across your mind
the slight adjustment to the way you are sitting
I catch you staring
you don't even realize you are smiling
so pull me close lover
as the sun warms my skin
so you warm my soul
whisper your desires into my ear
take my hand as you hold my heart
what God joined together
let no man part
As yesterday, as today and forever Beloved
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Re. As Salt Cures the Heart
15th May 2019 3:52am
Minxie! This is beautiful! Congratulations on such a lovely communion of partnership.
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15th May 2019 4:01am
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15th May 2019 4:03am
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15th May 2019 10:21am
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15th May 2019 2:25pm
Love in my sincerity and lust in my passion! Thanks for the read and comment PP!
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15th May 2019 2:34pm
Re. As Salt Cures the Heart
15th May 2019 10:31pm
Dear lasse this is absolutely captivating love it. I thought of mine as i read yours thank you for gracing us with such pleasantry
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15th May 2019 10:56pm
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16th May 2019 5:57pm
Re. As Salt Cures the Heart
this speaks of a deep ramification (growth / effect/ development) :
"As salt cures the heart.."
yet, the whole of is so beautiful hun
"As salt cures the heart.."
yet, the whole of is so beautiful hun
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Being married for 26 years and we've had a lot of salty tears falling and we were at the beach when I wrote it. Walking along the beach the waves just roar in and it just moved me to compare it to the ferocity and tumultuous of our relationship.
Re: Re. As Salt Cures the Heart
23rd May 2019 2:12am
aaww, marriage, i believe is not for the faint-heart,
it takes courage and strength, thusly a lot more
it takes courage and strength, thusly a lot more
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23rd May 2019 2:14am
Exactly, just like being in the ocean either sink or swim. And at times you'd like to drown but you just keep swimming on.
Thank you for your comments!
-Minxy ❣
Thank you for your comments!
-Minxy ❣