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A Grain Of Sand ( String of haiku/senryu)
I tried to keep you
Held you tightly in my fist
But you slipped away
Like small grains of sand
You found a crack, tiny gaps
Between my fingers
You dripped so slowly
Eager to go and be free
Until you are gone
You drifted away
In the changing tides of time
Back into the sea
You were just a grain
Of sand I held in my hand
Gone too soon from me
A passing season
That left a sad memory
A moment in time
Held you tightly in my fist
But you slipped away
Like small grains of sand
You found a crack, tiny gaps
Between my fingers
You dripped so slowly
Eager to go and be free
Until you are gone
You drifted away
In the changing tides of time
Back into the sea
You were just a grain
Of sand I held in my hand
Gone too soon from me
A passing season
That left a sad memory
A moment in time
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13th May 2019 7:09pm
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13th May 2019 7:13pm
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13th May 2019 7:22pm
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13th May 2019 7:36pm
Connected.
One would have better luck capturing water bare handed then to try holding on to unrequited love.
One would have better luck capturing water bare handed then to try holding on to unrequited love.
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13th May 2019 7:44pm
Thank you Snugglebuck for your comment. It was not exactly unrequited love it was friendship that didn't last.:-)
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14th May 2019 10:21am
A real sad poem that either depicts the loss of a dear one or someone you loved so much who did not reciprocate your love. Splendid nevertheless.
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17th May 2019 10:01am
You knocked this one right out of the park! Excellent work! I sent it right to my reading list!
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