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A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
Sylvia Plath in 18th Century Romania
could not read nor write-
wasn't a poet;
but, worked the farm instead;
sold livestock: chickens
cows, also pigs-
consoled each animal
before they were marketed
for slaughter
Her lips tasted like feathers
salt, and cold-blooded fish
because she kissed them deeply
upon departure;
or, so it's mongered -
No one ever really got close enough
to personally confirm
~
could not read nor write-
wasn't a poet;
but, worked the farm instead;
sold livestock: chickens
cows, also pigs-
consoled each animal
before they were marketed
for slaughter
Her lips tasted like feathers
salt, and cold-blooded fish
because she kissed them deeply
upon departure;
or, so it's mongered -
No one ever really got close enough
to personally confirm
~
Author's Note
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Image- Tanara din Muscel - Romania, 18th Century
Image- Tanara din Muscel - Romania, 18th Century
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Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
12th May 2019 00:22am
she is beautiful in the photograph. there is something expressed that is very pure that is hidden.
not for most but i am glad i can see that.
not for most but i am glad i can see that.
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
She definitely has Plath's demeanor about her. Women were more or less chattal back then. I am often inspired by vintage photographs, almost as though they were previous lives.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
12th May 2019 4:45am
Thanks, hrshykss - Plath was a difficult one to understand; this series is going to be difficult unless readers really understand the essence of the poets featured.
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
12th May 2019 4:52am
It's amazing how open she was, and yet very few saw beneath the surface. I think it was her Scorpio essence, same ( yet different ) as Sexton.
Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
Anonymous
12th May 2019 6:21pm
What a brilliantly unique way of describing Plath virtually being a stranger to the world. This is by far the oddest poem of yours I have ever read. 📝❤
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12th May 2019 6:53pm
Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
16th May 2019 3:21am
She was too sensitive but she coped by withdrawing into the beauty of death as release, your poem shows a real step back into a time when it was ok to be that uncomplicated and it worked, unlike in today's modern world of language becoming a neurosis for some, many poets exemplifying that, but that's just one interpretation, like with her poems, there is likely more under the ambiguous surface..
The picture does resemble her in facial expression..
The picture does resemble her in facial expression..
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
16th May 2019 12:32pm
Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
I just thought of a cool suggestion, how about Pablo Neruda as a bullfighter, the bull is like his lover in 'A Song Of Despair' , he loves it and destroys it at the same time..
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
17th May 2019 5:51am
Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
21st May 2019 4:02am
if only she could read this.. though i do believe you channelled our love
amasing!
amasing!
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Re: Re. A Quintuple of Poets: Part I
21st May 2019 4:06am