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Dear Adonai
Once upon a time,
I was told that;
anything could be mine.
I saw magic and mystery;
in everything; But, now,
that is ancient history.
Life's greatest lessons;
have shattered such fantasies;
and lead to depression.
The greatest man I've ever known died;
A long time ago, but he's alive inside.
We've done all that I need in my time.
Dear Adonai,
if you're listening;
Take me home tonight.
I was told that;
anything could be mine.
I saw magic and mystery;
in everything; But, now,
that is ancient history.
Life's greatest lessons;
have shattered such fantasies;
and lead to depression.
The greatest man I've ever known died;
A long time ago, but he's alive inside.
We've done all that I need in my time.
Dear Adonai,
if you're listening;
Take me home tonight.
Published 10th May 2019
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10th May 2019 10:05pm
It's so great when you get inspired and surprise even yourself! Been there, my friend!
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11th May 2019 9:11pm
Anonymous
14th May 2019 1:36pm
Though I’m not in any kinda hurry to leave this world, I can certainly understand the sentiments. It gets hard some days…
15th May 2019 3:01am
Hey hey!! Thanks for stopping by and leaving me a comment! :D It sure does!
17th Oct 2019 4:04am
Beautifully sad! What gorgeous ink you have ChaoticWayz! It bleeds out feelings of heavily oppressive feels but it does it with grace! RL material for sure!
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
6th Nov 2019 12:07pm
23rd Dec 2019 11:29am
Such a beautiful, bittersweet piece if ink. I really liked your writing, chaotic!
23rd Dec 2019 9:41pm
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