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Relinquished
Relinquished
Balancing atoms of life
toxic tightrope flinch
I take stiffening steps
the suicidal inch
Caressing the sore
our chemical weave
It’s textured impurities
untwining fatigue
The absurd softness
I can't swim
pain dazzled light
my splintered wings.
Balancing atoms of life
toxic tightrope flinch
I take stiffening steps
the suicidal inch
Caressing the sore
our chemical weave
It’s textured impurities
untwining fatigue
The absurd softness
I can't swim
pain dazzled light
my splintered wings.
Published 10th May 2019
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10th May 2019 7:21pm
"Caressing the sore
our chemical weave
It’s textured impurities
untwining fatigue"
dearest Joe I feel this deeply...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
our chemical weave
It’s textured impurities
untwining fatigue"
dearest Joe I feel this deeply...
great write...
love Brenda ❤
10th May 2019 9:32pm
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28th May 2019 9:52pm
That's a pretty neat way of articulating anger at the cellular level of life. And welcome to DUP, Josh.
7th Sep 2019 9:10pm
Damn puzzling way of writing that was awesome way to put it out never would have looked at writing any in this mannerism
