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Connect
no audience
time slips away
cryptic garden
another poets grave
death breaths
eternal life
falling off
a calculated map
out to pasture
slitting throats
when relevance
is thru with you
underdog
bleeding hope
call it a noose
my eternal rope
lost soul
moving forward
denied work
common fact
so old school
take it in
punishing my
own number
this universe
thinks i’m absent
taking notes
of failure
call me
when your serious
and maybe
we can connect
time slips away
cryptic garden
another poets grave
death breaths
eternal life
falling off
a calculated map
out to pasture
slitting throats
when relevance
is thru with you
underdog
bleeding hope
call it a noose
my eternal rope
lost soul
moving forward
denied work
common fact
so old school
take it in
punishing my
own number
this universe
thinks i’m absent
taking notes
of failure
call me
when your serious
and maybe
we can connect
Published 10th May 2019
| Edited 13th May 2019
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10th May 2019 1:18am
10th May 2019 2:17am
10th May 2019 2:28am
Dave my brother it's an ever-changing audience in a sea of faces
I feel you man...
love Brenda 💕
I feel you man...
love Brenda 💕
Brenda.. my sister.. so much truth, I 'll always be me.. It's all I know how to be. love you..
Dave
Dave
10th May 2019 9:26pm
"when relevance is thru with you"
"my eternal rope"
"this universe/ thinks i'm absent..."
My favorite little bits of this good poem.
"my eternal rope"
"this universe/ thinks i'm absent..."
My favorite little bits of this good poem.
10th May 2019 10:34pm
18th May 2019 6:29pm
Brutal truth, Dave. I've been saddened by this, often wondering if commentary is honest. I feel you, but you are anything but a dead poet...your audience must be! 💖
25th May 2019 6:46am
Pandora.. not only am I alive, and well.. but I'll always speak the truth.. and I appreciate your art, and respect..
Dave
Dave
20th May 2019 00:46am
