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a little less me
I'm out of the loop in the universe
the world spins and me with it
slow down baby please
and give me reprieve
I'm losing my footing
trying to get a grip but I'm slipping
it shows my sickness
I try to hide it but it glows in the darkness
you're losing it honey and everyone knows
you're just not yourself anymore
as the sands of time keep pouring out
I race faster and faster to keep up
but I'm getting nowhere
I'm losing traction on the Earth
I rally my soul to fight
bending my words
in hopes of freedom
with a ferocity I battle
still I find I'm losing
little bits of me glimmer then fade
a little less me every day
I reach for the stars to steady me
laying hands on one
I seek to weave it into my poetry
it sparkles then fades within my grasp
I want to dazzle and amaze
but my words crumble under the weight of me
the magnitude of what I want to utter
can't be contained in a poem
It hurts to be full of the universe
without proper expression
so I sit here spinning on the Earth's axis
lonely in my solitude
with thoughts that want to burst free
if only I was a little less me
Author's Note
I started this thinking about how I've not been here lately
it turned into a poem expressing how I haven't had the words lately
to express what goes through my head...
I just wanted to apologize for being a little less me lately...
it turned into a poem expressing how I haven't had the words lately
to express what goes through my head...
I just wanted to apologize for being a little less me lately...
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Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 6:40pm
aaaaaaaah Beautiful Sister there is never a need for apologies as long as You are living and feeling
and doing << You >>
You know we all love You and want the best for You
excellent spill, BTW
and doing << You >>
You know we all love You and want the best for You
excellent spill, BTW
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Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 6:42pm
aw thank you dearest Tallen I really do miss all of you... I'm just struggling at the moment with my ability to fully express myself...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 6:48pm
Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 6:50pm
thank you dearest Tim for the love here I just need to harnass this chaos like I once did and bend it to my will...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda ❤
Re. a little less me
Anonymous
9th May 2019 8:47pm
Ah, Bren...no need to apologize, lady;
we all hit walls but it`s only a matter
of time before your break through them
and come out swinging with a passion
you would have thought long gone. It`s
best to sit idle [ for awhile ] and not
force the words; eventually they do
flow through, and before you know it,
you`re creating masterpieces of poetic
art...kisses to you, chin up, we`ll be waiting...
love to my Queen, ~Dev
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Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 8:49pm
thank you my beautiful Queen I read your poem today and felt the first bit of fire rise in me after a long time of nothing...I deeply appreciate the inspiration...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. a little less me
Anonymous
11th May 2019 6:29am
always happy to inspire my Queen😘
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9th May 2019 9:30pm
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Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 9:36pm
Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 10:06pm
Regarding your note: You have the words, just in reserve. It's always a pleasure to read you, Brenda, both in your darkness and your light.
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Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 10:26pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas you're right they're hanging around in me until they burn with the telling... I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 11:03pm
It's a head-spinning world - a continuous challenge - which is all part 'n parcel to be expressed - and nicely done too.
{ PS can't seem to find ElusiveSleepfall/Matthew anywhere on DUP. I remember he used to reply a lot on your poems. I get concerned when someone 'disappears'; hope he's o.k. Know anything? }
{ PS can't seem to find ElusiveSleepfall/Matthew anywhere on DUP. I remember he used to reply a lot on your poems. I get concerned when someone 'disappears'; hope he's o.k. Know anything? }
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Re: Re. a little less me
9th May 2019 11:45pm
thank you dearest Josh for such a thoughtful comment...I love your insight... I haven't seen Matthew either and haven't heard anything... sorry...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. a little less me
10th May 2019 4:54am
We all face extraordinary challenges at times ... even from within ... beautiful as ever ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. a little less me
10th May 2019 5:51pm
thank you graciously dearest FeNyX for the insight...
bless and love...
love Brenda ❤
bless and love...
love Brenda ❤
Re. a little less me
7th Jul 2019 9:21pm
You will never be alone, and there are little pieces of you deep inside they don't disappear they sit and wait until your ready and not before.
when you reach for that star and your holding it in your hand when you think it fades within your grasp, it hasn't faded its there inside and that's why you burn so brightly everytime you put heart and soul to paper.
when you reach for that star and your holding it in your hand when you think it fades within your grasp, it hasn't faded its there inside and that's why you burn so brightly everytime you put heart and soul to paper.
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Re: Re. a little less me
7th Jul 2019 9:43pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for your very thoughtful and insightful comments...
I really appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I really appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕