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New Moon in Taurus
Desert Fathers were nomadic
earthy predecessors, reverently
observing Life's cyclic order
Unobtrusive pilgrims on their path
discerning May's brightest headline
as flowers' exuberantly colored skin
heralding new beginnings:
streams, rivers, lakes;
growing creations
by cold, melty things
when our world is [quite] mud-. luscious
Brighter still was midnight
sans Luna, withdrawn
into her ritualized session
Stars shrewdly punctured pupils
searching for meaning in absence
behind dainty flicks of distance
You see? We poets eschew daily news
to pen what matters most instead:
common, every day moments
~
earthy predecessors, reverently
observing Life's cyclic order
Unobtrusive pilgrims on their path
discerning May's brightest headline
as flowers' exuberantly colored skin
heralding new beginnings:
streams, rivers, lakes;
growing creations
by cold, melty things
when our world is [quite] mud-. luscious
Brighter still was midnight
sans Luna, withdrawn
into her ritualized session
Stars shrewdly punctured pupils
searching for meaning in absence
behind dainty flicks of distance
You see? We poets eschew daily news
to pen what matters most instead:
common, every day moments
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 3rd May 2019
| Edited 4th May 2019
Author's Note
For J with Love 💜💑💋
87 words/ 87 unique sans title - gonna continue exploring this discipline
Image; Odilon Redon / Italics E.E. Cummings
87 words/ 87 unique sans title - gonna continue exploring this discipline
Image; Odilon Redon / Italics E.E. Cummings
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4th May 2019 2:23am
Re. New Moon in Taurus
4th May 2019 4:23am
I like the stars description, the 'dainty flicks of distance' , it reminded me of stargazing sessions, a much more peaceful view than the flickering TV and better to write about.. Some things never change (like the stars)..
The picture is beautiful, compliments the poem:)
The picture is beautiful, compliments the poem:)
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8th May 2019 2:35am
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4th May 2019 11:19am
"You see? We poets eschew daily news
to pen what matters most instead:
every day moments"
... a recipe for sanity in a crazy world .... beautifully penned
to pen what matters most instead:
every day moments"
... a recipe for sanity in a crazy world .... beautifully penned
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Anonymous
4th May 2019 12:07pm
The discipline as you call it would drive most people mad. We should use the challenge in the next series of pre NaPo 2020 exercises!
"Stars shrewdly punctured pupils"
What a vivid almost cringeworthy ( in a good way ) description.
Most of what qualifies as news these days is quite pathetic. It really is in our best interest to unplug and honor nature such as you have.
And I am honored as well by the dedication.
I Love You 💜💑💋
"Stars shrewdly punctured pupils"
What a vivid almost cringeworthy ( in a good way ) description.
Most of what qualifies as news these days is quite pathetic. It really is in our best interest to unplug and honor nature such as you have.
And I am honored as well by the dedication.
I Love You 💜💑💋
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Re. New Moon in Taurus
4th May 2019 9:57pm
That second to last stanza was utterly fantastic
phrasing! Loved the entirety of it content as well :)
phrasing! Loved the entirety of it content as well :)
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5th May 2019 11:42pm
The biggest difference between western and eastern paths is that of lineal time and cyclic...a belief in progress or an acceptance of ordered chaos. Love this ink A.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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6th May 2019 3:41am
Absolutely incredible. A well crafted piece that evokes the primal spiritual self, yet finishes with a tongue in cheek flourish.
Tasty read, indeed.
Tasty read, indeed.
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8th May 2019 2:37am
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A true delight !
Lunacy and the Bull !
Finely crafted.
PS Love the illustration/painting/image
Lunacy and the Bull !
Finely crafted.
PS Love the illustration/painting/image
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10th May 2019 2:40pm
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