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Unsent Letters
His vulnerability
was always
his
strength
even when
the weight
of us
became
too much
he pinned me
underneath
him
post
hours
of gazing
into those
deep blue
eyes
from across
the dance floor
and
I inhaled
his breath
whilst stealing
scented kisses
and
the way
we made
love
is still
etched upon
my heart
and
soul
decades later
as I grieve
the loss
of the
time lapsed
in which
we should’ve
shared
our souls
nurturing
and
nourishing
one
another
forevermore.
was always
his
strength
even when
the weight
of us
became
too much
he pinned me
underneath
him
post
hours
of gazing
into those
deep blue
eyes
from across
the dance floor
and
I inhaled
his breath
whilst stealing
scented kisses
and
the way
we made
love
is still
etched upon
my heart
and
soul
decades later
as I grieve
the loss
of the
time lapsed
in which
we should’ve
shared
our souls
nurturing
and
nourishing
one
another
forevermore.
Published 3rd May 2019
Author's Note
We were lovers... before we became friends !
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Anonymous
3rd May 2019 4:45pm
Deeply loving...emotionally real...Yeah, like that!
3rd May 2019 4:52pm
Very, very well done romantic write.
This incredible piece just earned a spot on my reading list.
This incredible piece just earned a spot on my reading list.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
3rd May 2019 5:09pm
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3rd May 2019 6:51pm
Incredible focused linear razor of emotion delivered with charged clarity.
Daniel
Daniel
4th May 2019 7:13am
"the way
we made
love
is still
etched upon
my heart
and
soul"
Great feeling. Awesome poem 😁
we made
love
is still
etched upon
my heart
and
soul"
Great feeling. Awesome poem 😁
5th May 2019 3:31am
''decades later
as I grieve
the loss
of the
time lapsed
in which
we should’ve
shared
our souls ''
damn that's heavy....
as I grieve
the loss
of the
time lapsed
in which
we should’ve
shared
our souls ''
damn that's heavy....
5th May 2019 5:24am
