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one leaves a trace ..
love the lines on your
face, I wrote one or two
of them myself, but in
any case, damn it, I
would never write lines
upon anyone else ..
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Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 00:57am
This is one of your very best poems Paul...a poem of love...passion...and confessional?
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 1:10am
Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 1:05am
I agree that this is fantastic, and an absolute gem of a tribute to monogamous love.
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Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 1:12am
Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 5:28am
I'll wager your lady has decided you're a keeper, Dart...this little piece of poetry surely is...great ink... beautifully expressed... Ely
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Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 10:57pm
keeper? when I was younger, playing in goal
meant I never had to head the ball .. :)
meant I never had to head the ball .. :)
Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 12:13pm
Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
Re. one leaves a trace ..
3rd May 2019 4:01pm
So damn loyal!
Do you have a brother, btw?
😅
Few words but it says all. Love it!
Do you have a brother, btw?
😅
Few words but it says all. Love it!
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Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
Re: Re. one leaves a trace ..
4th May 2019 2:00am
Why not? It is so rare nowadays. Makes me wish to be born a generation behind.
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