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Afterward: Proverbs [ NaPoWriMo 2019 Collection ] 30/30
Afterward
What are Proverbs
but experienced moments
becoming wiser
than you were
a-second's blink before
Stumble, pull yourself up
with Universal apron strings
amid this second chance-space;
some absorb truth; others deflect
knowledge, grow resentful, bitter
seeing unjust punishment
by an all-powerful Deity
versus accept responsibility
Life offers infinite direction-
blueprinted situations
we charted ourselves
to learn every action—
thus reaction— stems
from only one of two emotions:
Love which releases—
doesn't demand presence
or attention, gracefully respects
someone's freedom;
lets them live peaceably;
and,
Fear that holds on—
won't let go; pursues
pleads their own desire
infiltrates another's sacred space;
attempts temple desecration
through jealous, subversive acts
fooling the innocent—
all in vain. . .
they realize too soon—
miserable intent
becomes a karmic sentence
no matter pleading forgiveness—
such cyclic wheel must finish
As my Father said:
'Therein lies the difference
between those who prayed
for their enemies' happiness
and those who spitefully
cursed them'
~
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unique - 136 ( sans end quote )
What are Proverbs
but experienced moments
becoming wiser
than you were
a-second's blink before
Stumble, pull yourself up
with Universal apron strings
amid this second chance-space;
some absorb truth; others deflect
knowledge, grow resentful, bitter
seeing unjust punishment
by an all-powerful Deity
versus accept responsibility
Life offers infinite direction-
blueprinted situations
we charted ourselves
to learn every action—
thus reaction— stems
from only one of two emotions:
Love which releases—
doesn't demand presence
or attention, gracefully respects
someone's freedom;
lets them live peaceably;
and,
Fear that holds on—
won't let go; pursues
pleads their own desire
infiltrates another's sacred space;
attempts temple desecration
through jealous, subversive acts
fooling the innocent—
all in vain. . .
they realize too soon—
miserable intent
becomes a karmic sentence
no matter pleading forgiveness—
such cyclic wheel must finish
As my Father said:
'Therein lies the difference
between those who prayed
for their enemies' happiness
and those who spitefully
cursed them'
~
words - 136
unique - 136 ( sans end quote )
Author's Note
30 poems in 30 days with only unique words, sans titles and quotes. Thank you to my Soul-Twin, to whom this NaPo was dedicated to, for his unwavering love, support, and partnership in another phenomenal year of NaPo! I Love You! 💜💑💋Forward to 20/20!
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Re. Afterward: Proverbs [ NaPoWriMo 2019 Collection ] 30/30
1st May 2019 4:35am
Such a profound work of Art A, you really went above and beyond with the contest, congratulations.
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1st May 2019 4:37am
Thank you so much, Tim. We couldn't have done it without you being a part of the team. [/truth]
Here's to 20/20! Hope you're on board with us!
Here's to 20/20! Hope you're on board with us!
Re. Afterward: Proverbs [ NaPoWriMo 2019 Collection ] 30/30
Anonymous
1st May 2019 11:07am
Day Thirty
You wrapped up this epic poem and labor of Love so amazingly on target.
To treat life as a game that necessitates strategy for personal gain will leave one a loser never gaining what is really important:
learning from your own mistakes by approaching challenges at different angles, rather than repeating the same behaviors that get you nowhere on the board;
exploring all the branches of the tree you could be.
I Loved being challenged every day in reading this.
And I Love You. 💜💑💋
You wrapped up this epic poem and labor of Love so amazingly on target.
To treat life as a game that necessitates strategy for personal gain will leave one a loser never gaining what is really important:
learning from your own mistakes by approaching challenges at different angles, rather than repeating the same behaviors that get you nowhere on the board;
exploring all the branches of the tree you could be.
I Loved being challenged every day in reading this.
And I Love You. 💜💑💋
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1st May 2019 1:17pm
Your support was the foundation of my ability to carry on. I certainly couldn't have done it without you. So thank you for your musery, your inspiration, and your Love.
I Love You. 💜💑💋
I Love You. 💜💑💋
Re. Afterward: Proverbs [ NaPoWriMo 2019 Collection ] 30/30
1st May 2019 11:47am
30 no-word-repeat poems - that was some target you set yourself, Ahavati. Parabens many time over. It was great to read my way through the month with you. :))
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1st May 2019 11:49am
Thank you so much for your encouragement and support, Josh. There's a bit of an issue getting the entire thing together in one post - something about spaces, but the Webmiss is working on it.
It was an honor sailing with you again this year! On to 20/20!
It was an honor sailing with you again this year! On to 20/20!
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2nd May 2019 11:05am
Hi, Timagination. Sorry it took me a bit to reply to you, but I really wanted to think over your response.
While many don't believe in God, everybody believes in something; even believing in nothing is believing in something, ergo my use of 'deity' vs. God. What you believe in becomes your deity.
Revenge is a weapon of choice because hurt people hurt people thinking it will make them feel better - but it doesn't. Then there's the reaction of those being hurt hurting back and the cycle becomes endless. Fear is definitely the underlying cause of any negative emotion; and, conversely, Love fuels positive ones.
People find fault mostly because they need someone or thing to blame rather than accept responsibility of their own choices. And in the case of non choice, they find blame to channel their negative emotions because, at the time, they're unable to accept the situation.
While I agree that Christianity is being attacked, other religions are being attacked as well. Those involved are afraid everyone else's religion will become the dominant religion and they can't allow that to happen. 'Afraid' being the operative word there.
Universal law returns what a person emits - positive or negative - there's no getting around that one. So be careful what you wish for in regards to seeing who you perceive as your enemy's fate. For it may become your own.
I know many miserable people who have become perpetual victims of their own desires toward others they wish to control, but can't.
Thank you for your comment.
While many don't believe in God, everybody believes in something; even believing in nothing is believing in something, ergo my use of 'deity' vs. God. What you believe in becomes your deity.
Revenge is a weapon of choice because hurt people hurt people thinking it will make them feel better - but it doesn't. Then there's the reaction of those being hurt hurting back and the cycle becomes endless. Fear is definitely the underlying cause of any negative emotion; and, conversely, Love fuels positive ones.
People find fault mostly because they need someone or thing to blame rather than accept responsibility of their own choices. And in the case of non choice, they find blame to channel their negative emotions because, at the time, they're unable to accept the situation.
While I agree that Christianity is being attacked, other religions are being attacked as well. Those involved are afraid everyone else's religion will become the dominant religion and they can't allow that to happen. 'Afraid' being the operative word there.
Universal law returns what a person emits - positive or negative - there's no getting around that one. So be careful what you wish for in regards to seeing who you perceive as your enemy's fate. For it may become your own.
I know many miserable people who have become perpetual victims of their own desires toward others they wish to control, but can't.
Thank you for your comment.
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1st May 2019 11:03pm
This is a real "thinking" poem A...fear is the worst karmic emotion and at the moment it is everywhere.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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I was taught everything we do stems from one of two sources alone: Love or Fear. The older I get, the more I believe the truth of this, Harry.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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1st May 2019 11:35pm
I agree A...Nietzsche said that fear is the mother of all morality...in today's world everyone is using it to find power lol.
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1st May 2019 11:37pm
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AW...my Wise one...it always pierces deep..the verses of Wisdom & the spiritual depths I ever imbibe upon in your verses of wisdom's pearlescence & streaming in light -always have a clarifying tranquility amidst whatever chaos am in..when I read your timeless poems-that would be treasured soulfully dever..
I love how you essentially zeroed upon -THe Two Emotions (in Polarities) - Love & Fear - Former the Truth that is so uncontainably unconditional as a Bird in Flight in Faith..The latter the Shadowy Shadows slaving self deeply & so ever deep in its black necrosis - of insecurity & even to the insanity extent of being inhumane & losing -the truth & love -itself . Totally Adoring this!
Esp. loved the Quoted part finally...
"Therein lies the difference
between those who prayed
for their enemies' happiness
and those who spitefully
cursed them"
Something struck so magically when i saw the wordlimit 136...its the number that holds a personal significace to me....& it is such falling in line -with the Sync we always & forever -would have dear wise One!
Will be reading you & my loved ones in DU -my poetic abode ever...in silence or distance or watever, you know!
Light Love & Peace my Dear Wise One---keep up the Deep's Lighted Torch in your Poetic Spiritual & Wise Essence ever. Uma xx
I love how you essentially zeroed upon -THe Two Emotions (in Polarities) - Love & Fear - Former the Truth that is so uncontainably unconditional as a Bird in Flight in Faith..The latter the Shadowy Shadows slaving self deeply & so ever deep in its black necrosis - of insecurity & even to the insanity extent of being inhumane & losing -the truth & love -itself . Totally Adoring this!
Esp. loved the Quoted part finally...
"Therein lies the difference
between those who prayed
for their enemies' happiness
and those who spitefully
cursed them"
Something struck so magically when i saw the wordlimit 136...its the number that holds a personal significace to me....& it is such falling in line -with the Sync we always & forever -would have dear wise One!
Will be reading you & my loved ones in DU -my poetic abode ever...in silence or distance or watever, you know!
Light Love & Peace my Dear Wise One---keep up the Deep's Lighted Torch in your Poetic Spiritual & Wise Essence ever. Uma xx
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3rd May 2019 3:12pm
Thank you so much, Uma. I truly appreciate your soul-words, and wish you and Rob all the best life has to offer in regards to love and happiness. You both deserve it so much.
It's a comfort to know you will still pop in and be watching over all of us from time to time. You're a DUP icon - and there will always be a place here for you.
Love, Light, Peace, and Friendship always
Ahavati
It's a comfort to know you will still pop in and be watching over all of us from time to time. You're a DUP icon - and there will always be a place here for you.
Love, Light, Peace, and Friendship always
Ahavati
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7th May 2019 1:16pm
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