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SENSUOUS BATH (INSPIRED BY 'SUDS')
Shared sensuous bath,
sounds of knowing laugh,
at end of the day
make for good foreplay.
With a glass to drink,
to shoulders we sink.
Enjoying a rest,
my back to your chest;
you stroke along arms,
sometimes cupping charms.
I give a murmur
as I start to stir.
It soon feels too much
your intimate touch.
I rise from my place
in tub, you then chase
me to towel rack,
rub me down, front, back,
to the bedroom run,
consummate the fun.
sounds of knowing laugh,
at end of the day
make for good foreplay.
With a glass to drink,
to shoulders we sink.
Enjoying a rest,
my back to your chest;
you stroke along arms,
sometimes cupping charms.
I give a murmur
as I start to stir.
It soon feels too much
your intimate touch.
I rise from my place
in tub, you then chase
me to towel rack,
rub me down, front, back,
to the bedroom run,
consummate the fun.
Published 29th Apr 2019
| Edited 3rd May 2019
Author's Note
Sparked by hrsykss's 'Suds' - bathroom setting end of day, with partner.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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29th Apr 2019 1:13pm
Oh... I love shared baths and showers with a lover; albeit it’s a tad dangerous for wet tiles and suds, can be fatal !
This, was a lovely compliment to another’s piece of work !
This, was a lovely compliment to another’s piece of work !
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
10th May 2019 9:26pm
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12th May 2019 7:33am
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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15th May 2019 10:41pm
awesome write
love these lines I rise from my place
in tub, you then chase
me to towel rack,
rub me down, front, back,
to the bedroom run,
consummate the fun
love these lines I rise from my place
in tub, you then chase
me to towel rack,
rub me down, front, back,
to the bedroom run,
consummate the fun
