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Untitled 4/26/19
Thoughts spiraling in my head
Most not coherent
Some about me
Others about you
Random moments
Happy memories
Lots of pain
Ideas of the future
Hoping for good times
Plots of books
Lyrics to songs
The world and the universe
Time and space
Many hobbies
Accompanied by good days
Then bad days
Filled with rain and sun and snow
Creatures in nature
Events with strangers
Crowded places
Empty house
Alone by myself
Lost in thought
Writing a poem
Only I truly understand
Most not coherent
Some about me
Others about you
Random moments
Happy memories
Lots of pain
Ideas of the future
Hoping for good times
Plots of books
Lyrics to songs
The world and the universe
Time and space
Many hobbies
Accompanied by good days
Then bad days
Filled with rain and sun and snow
Creatures in nature
Events with strangers
Crowded places
Empty house
Alone by myself
Lost in thought
Writing a poem
Only I truly understand
Published 26th Apr 2019
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26th Apr 2019 4:12pm
"Writing a poem
Only I truly understand" ... Prescient and feels so doesn't it? ... Bless and love ... .
Only I truly understand" ... Prescient and feels so doesn't it? ... Bless and love ... .
29th Apr 2019 9:38pm
Loved the austere form. The almost total absence of verbs, makes for creative reading.
