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Ink Blot
come on Baby
write me off
go slowly as your pen
paints my pleasure
my desire inspiring your words
your words inspiring my desire
write on and don't stop
for all we have is this single page
write faster I need to know what's next
my eyes want to close
but I cannot look away
write me off lover
no signature required
sign your pleasure with an ink blot
then we'll throw this in the fire
write me off
go slowly as your pen
paints my pleasure
my desire inspiring your words
your words inspiring my desire
write on and don't stop
for all we have is this single page
write faster I need to know what's next
my eyes want to close
but I cannot look away
write me off lover
no signature required
sign your pleasure with an ink blot
then we'll throw this in the fire
Published 26th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Usually when someone "writes you off" it's a dis after a hookup. So just embrace the poetic lover that wants to play on your page. If you're lucky he will "Write you off". Then you can turn the page.
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26th Apr 2019 6:49am
It's a lovely sentiment & one to treasure, but just as risky....
My two brought me passion that felt more realistic than life & a heartache I can't shake. It's an unsteady territory for me. I don't beg or wish to be the poetry anymore. 😢
My two brought me passion that felt more realistic than life & a heartache I can't shake. It's an unsteady territory for me. I don't beg or wish to be the poetry anymore. 😢
26th Apr 2019 7:08am
26th Apr 2019 4:09pm
26th Apr 2019 6:09pm
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27th Apr 2019 6:09am
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27th Apr 2019 6:13am
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28th Apr 2019 6:28am
Sublime and subtle wow. Kudos for this hot poem.
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
28th Apr 2019 11:26pm
This is an amazing piece of ink...damn original and thought provoking.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
29th Apr 2019 1:09pm
Thanks Harry! I enjoyed writing this one. Celebrating the power of words when used properly and the reaction that said words could provoke. Yet what comes first the muse or the words attracting the new muse...etc.? Honored to be on your RL!
-Minx
-Minx
3rd Aug 2019 2:29am
Write it off as it'll always be different every time I guess. It's something you're never gonna perfect, right?
So just throw it away, discard it until you're ready to go again. :-)
So just throw it away, discard it until you're ready to go again. :-)
3rd Aug 2019 2:35am
And the important thing is that you'll want to go again...again. It's a great little poem too. It's deeper than the words written really.
3rd Aug 2019 2:46am
beautiful Minx great write
very relatable to anyone who's had a poetic love
disenchantment always hurts...
hugs Brenda ❤
very relatable to anyone who's had a poetic love
disenchantment always hurts...
hugs Brenda ❤
