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A Palindrome: The truth of us
Love my love,
heart my heart
you remembered it
near and far,
forever and always.
For you, suchness,
my soultwin, sunshine
My heart
my beat
And dry it bled
I, loving and loved;
loved and loving,
I bled it dry
and beat my heart!
My Sunshine,
soultwin;
my suchness
You!
For always and forever,
far and near
it remembered you.
Heart! My heart
Love! My love.
Published 30th Nov 2011
| Edited 28th Dec 2011
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30th Nov 2011 8:55pm
30th Nov 2011 9:04pm
Bigmomma
Welcome to DUP.
Thank you for
stopping by and
the read.
This is an experiment
at coming up with a
palindrome. Honestly
this is the first one
I ever wrote.
Glad you liked it.
Best wishes
S'
Welcome to DUP.
Thank you for
stopping by and
the read.
This is an experiment
at coming up with a
palindrome. Honestly
this is the first one
I ever wrote.
Glad you liked it.
Best wishes
S'
30th Nov 2011 9:51pm
is a whisper in a universe of words, that seems to speak to a soul in its eternal journey of life, living and love. Thats how I see it, Sumeet.:D
30th Nov 2011 10:44pm
1st Dec 2011 8:23am
I really enjoyed this, and I'm so impressed with the way you play with words! Quite lovely, and inventive.
1st Dec 2011 9:16am
Hey Istra
Thank you for the honour.
You are really kind.
And am happy that you enjoyed.
Light,
S'
Thank you for the honour.
You are really kind.
And am happy that you enjoyed.
Light,
S'
28th Dec 2011 12:49pm
Summit! This is a superb little palindrome. I wouldn't even know where to start with one. This is beautiful and easy to read 'heart my heart - you remembered it'
28th Dec 2011 5:07pm
LA
Thank you again
dear poetess.
For stopping by.
Elated you think
so.
Curtsy,
S'
Thank you again
dear poetess.
For stopping by.
Elated you think
so.
Curtsy,
S'
