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morbid androgyny
here I cum unhinged
straight up feeling the energy
bend, bump and grind
been doing time in a silent void
fiercely, seriously escalating some violence
demons teeming I slash
tear the wallpaper from the walls
break bars, escape the tomb
I rose from the dead to kick some ass
hallelujah glory, glory
this beat can't be mimicked
learned or broken
get up out of your seats
meet me in the alley
for some soul-shaking, soul licking fanfare
in this unholy fuck fest
let your sores fester, ooze and bubble
speak from a place of discontent
I know you feel it in your chests
that sense of unrest
been waiting on it
yeah I feel you
I'll promise to rape your feelings
make them talk Truth
suck the tip
leave you limp and spent
but you'll know you got fucked
by the baddest ho round the block
slinging some real talk tho from the netherworld
you know me yo
can't hide my true nature
feral doggie style let's do the damned thing
fuck I'm in a rage
caging this androgynous misogyny
got to inflict some damage
finger fuck some hurt feelings
got to admit being ugly is pretty sometimes
Published 24th Apr 2019
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24th Apr 2019 3:10pm
24th Apr 2019 3:12pm
24th Apr 2019 3:17pm
I'm not sure how i feel about this POWERFUL spill
inside of me
i don't know if i should be angry or if this causes some sad.
Nevertheless,
it does not take-away anything of Your expertly crafted spill
inside of me
i don't know if i should be angry or if this causes some sad.
Nevertheless,
it does not take-away anything of Your expertly crafted spill
24th Apr 2019 3:19pm
hey there dearest Tallen thank you mixed feelings is fine... I understand...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
24th Apr 2019 3:38pm
24th Apr 2019 3:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One truth is I've been depressed trying to fight my way out of if...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
24th Apr 2019 6:38pm
Anonymous
24th Apr 2019 3:41pm
She's inciting a riot here! Riling up those emotions and waking up the beast. Sometimes ya gotta, yeah? I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
24th Apr 2019 3:44pm
thank you beautiful Willow fighting depression the only way I know how... I deeply feel your love....
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
I love you...
love Brenda 💕
24th Apr 2019 4:14pm
Hard to take smaller bites of the overwhelming....this at least puts it on the plate....off the table.
Anonymous
24th Apr 2019 4:49pm
You never have need for apologies my poetic friend.
There is much truth and beauty to be found in the darkness.
😘
There is much truth and beauty to be found in the darkness.
😘
24th Apr 2019 7:27pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
24th Apr 2019 7:51pm
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24th Apr 2019 9:24pm
Somehow I get a sense of triumph here. Your anger is formidable, and conducive to great poetry. Excellent work, Brenda.
24th Apr 2019 11:50pm
25th Apr 2019 00:21am
25th Apr 2019 11:08am
A beautiful, fierce rant Brenda. As long as you remain in control of your anger and use the power to focus it you will defeat your demons. Power to your pen sister! Love David xx
28th Apr 2019 11:39pm
Wow! Like a postmodern Bachonian fuck fest...love this powerful ink Brenda.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
2nd May 2019 6:24pm
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2nd May 2019 6:27pm
7th Jul 2019 11:25pm
Why say sorry crimsin, you want to fuck it until its spent then fine by being the baddest ho on the block let her be.
if you kept her caged then you don't know what could or would happen, sometimes the release in whatever shape or form is what we really need.
I like this as it so deep gritty but real.
if you kept her caged then you don't know what could or would happen, sometimes the release in whatever shape or form is what we really need.
I like this as it so deep gritty but real.
7th Jul 2019 11:35pm
thank you dearest poet this is just me acting out I do that sometimes I can't help it giggles I appreciate your acceptance of the thug side of me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
