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A Burning
Urges welling up
From the depths
Of my being
Threatening to overtake me
Hands shaking
Heart pounding
Can hear a deeper rumbling
Its my desire
Rising in me for you
Passion bone deep
A burning
Holding me in full arousal
I tremble
To have you in ways
That I have so imagined
Many times in my mind
Visions that shake my core
Of us in a sensual entwining
Rib wracking lust
Bringing emotional tears of joy
From the depths
Of my being
Threatening to overtake me
Hands shaking
Heart pounding
Can hear a deeper rumbling
Its my desire
Rising in me for you
Passion bone deep
A burning
Holding me in full arousal
I tremble
To have you in ways
That I have so imagined
Many times in my mind
Visions that shake my core
Of us in a sensual entwining
Rib wracking lust
Bringing emotional tears of joy
Published 23rd Apr 2019
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23rd Apr 2019 1:36pm
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2020 3:57pm
I agree with bk... that line is insane, in its ability at conjuring such an inspired lustful need.. and it is indeed "One hell of a line!!"
I completely disagree with Andres 100%(sorry Andres!) This spill evokes only positive need and passion...
"bone deep" passion.
You cannot have this kind of lust and desire and have bad sex, no way.
Just my thoughts...
Fucking awesome and a very VERY written piece.
💜 💜 💜
You amaze me, always
xoxo
B
I completely disagree with Andres 100%(sorry Andres!) This spill evokes only positive need and passion...
"bone deep" passion.
You cannot have this kind of lust and desire and have bad sex, no way.
Just my thoughts...
Fucking awesome and a very VERY written piece.
💜 💜 💜
You amaze me, always
xoxo
B
