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[ NaPo 2019 ] Poetic Medic
WAIT!
Before operating on this sterile
body of work occupying
intensive care - defibrillate!
Conditoned critical, my poetry
lying there under so many lamps
death near
Charging to 500 amps;
shouts
CLEAR!
Pulse returns
and it takes a breath
Rescuscitated, weak, restored
hereabouts to land of the living -
no longer terminally pathetic
destined for a morgue shelf
When it comes to honest critique
my dear Poetic Medic is kind
thoroughly giving of her healing self
Published 22nd Apr 2019
| Edited 11th Dec 2019
Author's Note
for Ahavati with Love 💜😷💋
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The author encourages honest critique.
Nothing like a 'Code Blue' for a little resucitating fun! Although I do believe you're faking it, for the most part, considering the caliber of your poetry!
[nonsensebunny]
This is as delightful as it is clever! Thank you so much! ❤📝
I Love You 💜💏💋
[nonsensebunny]
This is as delightful as it is clever! Thank you so much! ❤📝
I Love You 💜💏💋
23rd Apr 2019 00:13am
Ha! But seriously, my poetry is much improved thanks to your honest efforts and dedication to advancing poets in general.
Thank you for being my partner in all things, including Honest Critique!
I Love You! 💜😷💋
Thank you for being my partner in all things, including Honest Critique!
I Love You! 💜😷💋
