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Connect the Dots
Everyone loves them
Dots silly
So here's some more for you
Part of my narrative series
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Dots silly
So here's some more for you
Part of my narrative series
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Re. Connect the Dots
Anonymous
20th Apr 2019 1:34pm
You know what's interesting about dots? We can connect them any way we like...and they'll be different each way. No boundaries beyond their tiny individual spaces. I like options. :-)
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Re: Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 1:40pm
Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 2:12pm
I should know about dots...I have many...speckled from head to toe...
Thanks for your delightfully succinct little narrative, Poet... Ely
Thanks for your delightfully succinct little narrative, Poet... Ely
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Re: Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 3:16pm
Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 2:20pm
Re: Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 3:18pm
I've never known what being an a adult is about, despite having all the experiences....
Free spirit all the way here.
Thank you k
Free spirit all the way here.
Thank you k
Re: Re. Connect the Dots
We don't have to "grow up"
in order to be (responsible) adults...
no one is talking mutual exclusivity here...
in order to be (responsible) adults...
no one is talking mutual exclusivity here...
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Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 4:11pm
Re. Connect the Dots
Anonymous
20th Apr 2019 4:49pm
I hope I find ``happy`ness``
after I connect those freaking dots!
If I don`t, I`m gonna be pissed!!!!
*great piece, btw;)*
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Re: Re. Connect the Dots
20th Apr 2019 9:25pm
People find comfort in Dot Art.
It's simple and gratifying
Not sure I understand it
But it's modern art so who gives a fuck ?
Thx for the nod Dev xx
It's simple and gratifying
Not sure I understand it
But it's modern art so who gives a fuck ?
Thx for the nod Dev xx
Re: Re. Connect the Dots
21st Apr 2019 3:37pm
Perhaps it's the one thing that remains of childhood accepted by adults. Or, perhaps they simply enjoy it.
At any rate - good one, Poet.
At any rate - good one, Poet.
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Re: Re. Connect the Dots
21st Apr 2019 4:15pm