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LOST ON YOU
Charge into
What I don稚 want
Dance around
What I do
Stupid courage
Sets me up
And I知 so lost
On you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
Caught up in
The moment
Impulsive
It is true
I move
Without thinking
Because I知 so
Lost on you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
Reduced down
To waiting
For my letter
To reach you
All perspective
Fading as
I know I知
Lost on you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
What I don稚 want
Dance around
What I do
Stupid courage
Sets me up
And I知 so lost
On you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
Caught up in
The moment
Impulsive
It is true
I move
Without thinking
Because I知 so
Lost on you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
Reduced down
To waiting
For my letter
To reach you
All perspective
Fading as
I know I知
Lost on you
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
I知 so lost on you
I thought you knew
I thought you knew
Published 20th Apr 2019
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20th Apr 2019 5:26am
Reduced down
To waiting
For my letter
To reach you
This is so beautifully stated and tenderly felt, and I checked my mailbox, still no letter
To waiting
For my letter
To reach you
This is so beautifully stated and tenderly felt, and I checked my mailbox, still no letter
Anonymous
- Edited 27th May 2019 12:45pm
20th Apr 2019 10:48am
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26th Apr 2019 2:41am
I like the musical feel of this.
I've read it a few time and have discovered that it sound melancholy when you alternate the "I thought you knew" into a question and a statement. Great work!
I've read it a few time and have discovered that it sound melancholy when you alternate the "I thought you knew" into a question and a statement. Great work!
26th Apr 2019 3:05am
26th Apr 2019 3:06am
