Rising

This is quite beautiful in its expression & imagery, dear Sage... even restful.

This is pure loveliness Ahavati. The stages and phases of the moon well captured in this visual poem.

Beautiful, clever and contained. This knows when to pause and when to end. Glad you wrote a moon poem. It was glorious last night. We swam  beneath it with barrel jellyfish.  This sits nicely with my frame of mind.

M-O-O-N ... that spells poem!

At first I thought you were kidding, but then I looked up the names. Sure enough ...  

And then you nailed the ending.  

I'm also in admiration of anyone that can capture stunning photos of the Moon. 📷❤

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You invoke much here,
particularly with the contrast/
comparison ... it`s like a race
trying to be re`born ... interesting &
thought provoking, Lady ... Enjoyed ...

“Rising to live again”

With the sweet lunar blush

What a good idea for a poem!  Your ideas are an inspiration.

It is difficult to change, with the poem being in the form of a picture.  But nevertheless, perhaps "-" after moon on the "Maple Sap Moon" stanza, and also a semi-colon after Spring ... for consistency.  I feel super-picky for point these out.

And maybe, just maybe, a comma after rising, on the final line, to give it an extra energy in "to Live again".

Actually, I always save the templates for future editing ( never fails ).  Which, if I'm to be honest, is the reason it's difficult for me to publish. I see it in print and want to rip my hair out at how it could be so much better with, as in this case, that semi, or dash,  or comma - it's endless.

Thanks, btw.  It's been changed out.

When is a poem ever finished!?

As anlunarlover I liked this poem, ah pink is my fav too and the poem exquisite wow! And the end lines how u compare to the rising moon is a fine analogy. Kudos.

Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too

Quite Lovely.