Working Class Hero

How sweet; you wrote a poem about me lol j/k. Sometimes I feel like that. Unfortunately my situation right now doesn't give me the luxury of looking for a better job. Though that's the story of many.

Just for you, heh. I know the feeling well. This poem was mostly inspired by me working 2 jobs to make just enough to scrape by, and not having any time to myself for hobbies to enjoy the things I work for. I got about 5 and a half hours of sleep last night, but at least I was able to get this out of my system... :). Somewhat of an internal dialogue, but also aimed at those who are in similar situations. Hence most of it being in second person. Feeling the Pink Floyd vibe:

'Run, rabbit run
Dig that hole - forget the sun
And when at last the work is done
Don't sit down it's time to dig another one'

Anyway, thanks DevilsChild for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot. Thanks to the others that read and RLed too!

Well I relate all too well. I worked two jobs before. One was 15 hours over night and the other was supposed to be 8, but I convinced them to let me go home early some days. Also tried working while doing schooling full time. Yeah, it's a crazy way to live. You learn to value a lot after that.

Very true...

I really miss this website and all of the talented poets and kind souls that inhabit it. Most of all, I miss having time to write, or to even think deeply about things. Makes you appreciate the things you once took for granted, I guess.

I feel bad. There's still lots of comments on here I haven't replied to.

Life comes first. Just keep at it and one day it will pay off in one way or another.

Wow. Straight up. Very relatable to the plight of many. Think I landed a new job today, will know by Friday. Otherwise, keep on hunting.

Daniel

Best of luck with that, sir! I hope it's a good one. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment, Daniel

Aww all work and no play life seems sometimes, just dig dig dig until the grave is dug eh as you say so awesome creatively I really liked your poem lots! You rhymed it meaningfully in a remarkable way in enviable flow I'm glad to come read u today. Kudos for a poetic wonder I didn't miss.

Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too

A poetic wonder? Thanks so much for that wonderful compliment. I truly appreciate your time and your flattery :)

Such a strong impression. Very Good !!!

Thanks so much for your comments, Michael! I appreciate it :)

Wait,do I get paid for digging the last hole in the poem as well ...or is that one " on the house"? Roofing and Tree Service and Concrete Work...and a whole cavalry of soul sucking jobs.A friend once said 'work,the real capital punishment.

You get paid to dig the hole, but then your family has to take the money you earned to pay someone to pretty you up and put you in a casket in the hole. It's really a shame that even death is a business in this world, with the average funeral costing 7,000 - 10,000.

Boy, do I know the feeling. Hard physical labor will really wear your body out... Although I'm glad that you can relate, I feel for you.

I appreciate you stopping by, nick, and I'm honored by your RL! Thanks for your input...!

Haha and big business it is!! Your welcome.

I can relate to your poem ... I was inspired by John Lennon to write about 'A Middle Class Hero' https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/346508-a-middle-class-hero/

I saw this poem shared on Facebook this morning by Poetry for the Soul. It was so powerful I spent the morning trying to hunt down where to find it so I could let you know how amazing it was. I love poetry that grips the soul and leaves such haunting imagery on the mind.