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Life
Life is so bitter sweet
You think you know everything
And that your life's complete
Then life takes you for a spin
In a big whirlwind
What you thought you knew
You really didn't know
And disappointment wants to be your friend
But you manage to pick yourself up in the end
Yes life is hard
Show it your in charge
When life lets you down
Don't wear a frown
Fight it with a grin
Cause it's your life
You have to win
You think you know everything
And that your life's complete
Then life takes you for a spin
In a big whirlwind
What you thought you knew
You really didn't know
And disappointment wants to be your friend
But you manage to pick yourself up in the end
Yes life is hard
Show it your in charge
When life lets you down
Don't wear a frown
Fight it with a grin
Cause it's your life
You have to win
Published 13th Apr 2019
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13th Apr 2019 10:55pm
strong rhyming scheme, morally positive and realistic - excellent ink :-))))))))))))
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6th May 2019 2:01am
It's your life to win... I like that line. We have to make the best of it, yes. Nice write. 😊
5th Sep 2019 00:42am
You know all you know and never know alk truest knowledge of life. Love your kindness keep that its a rare gem in this world. Dont grow into a bitter elder as i have
