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Falling Into You
Heart touching heart,
each beat echoing
sounds of the waves
crashing into us
as we fall
deeper and deeper
into one another
each beat echoing
sounds of the waves
crashing into us
as we fall
deeper and deeper
into one another
Published 10th Apr 2019
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10th Apr 2019 6:39pm
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10th Apr 2019 6:41pm
Pretty much this is what has been happening to me
( i am Your muse, temporarily!! )
Wonderful Spill, Brother
( i am Your muse, temporarily!! )
Wonderful Spill, Brother
10th Apr 2019 7:00pm
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10th Apr 2019 7:01pm
Anonymous
10th Apr 2019 7:01pm
Sounds like an ocean of love here
10th Apr 2019 7:04pm
10th Apr 2019 8:38pm
Falling in love has seldom been so eloquently presented, seems to me. You will be caught, JusTim, and held where you need to be. Fine work!
10th Apr 2019 8:46pm
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11th Apr 2019 3:17am
Anonymous
11th Apr 2019 00:13am
if this is what falling in love
with someone feels like
then I truly haven`t fallen in love at all ...
excellent observation, JTim
11th Apr 2019 00:16am
Anonymous
12th Apr 2019 00:17am
Well, you keep doing your poetic thing
and fall you will!
~Dev
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 6:45am
11th Apr 2019 1:07pm
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