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“Maybe it’s my Imagination, But...”
I see, as I look
far beyond sight
lil’ signs of ‘less’ progression
A process, into who, how
why, n’ when ‘congestion
of morality ‘ booked
a one-way ticket flight...
Gone for so long now
simple civilities in everyday
interactions...
Can’t help but see it
as a fraction of a whole
of a symptom, problematic
actions...
that add up to, for me
what’s wrong about
the lack of light in
spite of life.
Published 10th Apr 2019
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10th Apr 2019 2:25pm
Apathy gives way to antipathy and that to animosity. Slippery slope and it just seems to get steeper. I see it too. Gotta find our own light sources and keep them shining to not get absorbed into the darkness around us...
10th Apr 2019 2:28pm
10th Apr 2019 2:33pm
Chi is a very powerful force within us. You're wise, my friend. And with such wisdom comes sorrow in that you see the problem, but simply don't know how to fix it beyond yourself.
Solid offering, Poetikone.
Solid offering, Poetikone.
10th Apr 2019 2:36pm
Funny enough you mention Chi... I’ve been taught n have studied martial arts since I was eight... n I’ve truly yet to master that lol. But yea gratefully appreciate you always :)
10th Apr 2019 3:17pm
No daydreams happening here.
The why?....I sometimes feel it is the lack of home schooling from parents, who had parents, who had parents...etc.
The cycle can only be broken by those who see it. But, like above, where to begin, other than by example?
The why?....I sometimes feel it is the lack of home schooling from parents, who had parents, who had parents...etc.
The cycle can only be broken by those who see it. But, like above, where to begin, other than by example?
10th Apr 2019 7:49pm
Yea, that’s right... taught n’ utilized by the generations... you thoughtful commentary is greatly appreciated :)
28th Apr 2019 7:07am
Thoughtprovoking muse expressed nicely. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
10th Jul 2019 11:08am
9th Jul 2019 12:45pm
“Gone for so long now
simple civilities in everyday
interactions... “
This resonates deep. I see it all around me, the disconnect in spite of that we’ve never been more connected.
simple civilities in everyday
interactions... “
This resonates deep. I see it all around me, the disconnect in spite of that we’ve never been more connected.
10th Jul 2019 11:12am
“Never been more connected” Ironic isn’t it?
For me at least...These are things that just makes it more discouraging when seeking sanity in an insane world... n thank you for your thoughts n
adding me to your poets list :)
For me at least...These are things that just makes it more discouraging when seeking sanity in an insane world... n thank you for your thoughts n
adding me to your poets list :)
