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Poem 5( A Disputed Love)
Bouncing through the cool waves of the Pens'
Simplistic unsaturated flow
Dancing on the shore in between am and pm
Smoking through the dawn and the yawn of the morning
Coming full force under the sheets while hes ejaculating and stroking the consciousness of my wet art
Painting the saddest day of my life when he walked out and the shadow of pain stayed
Facing the reflection of anger, hate and rage
Waking up to the replay of me making a fool of love
Running water over my embarrasment
Drinking this hurt down to the last drop
And throwing 151 up until my stomach screams
stop
This is pointless!
(Edited version 4-10-19 Copyrights of Red Curtain$)
Simplistic unsaturated flow
Dancing on the shore in between am and pm
Smoking through the dawn and the yawn of the morning
Coming full force under the sheets while hes ejaculating and stroking the consciousness of my wet art
Painting the saddest day of my life when he walked out and the shadow of pain stayed
Facing the reflection of anger, hate and rage
Waking up to the replay of me making a fool of love
Running water over my embarrasment
Drinking this hurt down to the last drop
And throwing 151 up until my stomach screams
stop
This is pointless!
(Edited version 4-10-19 Copyrights of Red Curtain$)
Published 10th Apr 2019
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10th Apr 2019 10:41pm
Damn! I know what you mean.... That damn love can take you through some alley ways and valley's and knock you into the precipice. But, I will say this you are and will always be too strong to let anything keep you down. We fall, but we don't stay there. We hurt, but we find our way to our healing... I know all too well escapism and the pills and the bottle, but I say there's a better way back to you, back to happiness with or with out that person... Hugs my sister... I feel your pain right to the heart.....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
10th Apr 2019 11:30pm
Its good to know someone doesn't dismiss how I'm feeling. Im not mad love doesn't love me back the way I want it to yet..but yea the pills are addicting. You told me this before I didn't listen. I'm not done with this series .
