Sinking Feeling

I like the way you describe different parts of you not moving together in the same direction with this fine metaphor.

I tend to think my mind, body and soul are separate entities.  I can only hope my soul survives.  Thank you JusTim!

It breathes in your poetry

I love metaphors
damn I love them

You see, you allow the reader to
take your writing
and apply it to their own
circumstance

The sign of a valuable writer!
Awesome stuff here, Sir

Blue Skies at you

Al

Thank you Al.  I agree.  A metaphor can be applied to other lives, even if the context is a bit personal.  I'm just glad others can relate.

All those who have suffered find themselves, at some point, divided at the core. Your soul is pure, my brother. Death is only a transition, not the condition. I truly believe that you are great soul. You are immortal. This write is a great reflection on an eternal truth: the division of the human nature. I always see in your interior reflections a hope that I lack and I admire you for it. Great ink

Thank you J.  My hope falters but somehow remains.  How long it will stay I have no idea.  I have a few mantras to help me along, supplied by my therapist.  "I'm strong. I can do this" brings a note of hope, however fleeting.  The weakness, and pessimism, still remain.  Thank you again, dear friend.  

Crow.. metaphors aside.. this speaks to the world today.. nicely done.. much respect..






Dave

Thank you, Dave.  I'm glad you see some ambition here.  Still, the world turns.

This piece truly embodies the despair of depression. Powerful work.

I'm just trying not to drown in that sea of despair.  Thank you Rjm!

a feeling and state which irritates the hell out of me..


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