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Inevitable Harmony
I know the answer
I know just how it should be
A thing practically intangible,
Such is its harmony.
A vision, a feeling, a reality,
But if only I had the courage or the clarity.
I’m blinded by ideals, choked with emotion,
Distracted by attractions, with a strong fantasy notion.
2005
I know just how it should be
A thing practically intangible,
Such is its harmony.
A vision, a feeling, a reality,
But if only I had the courage or the clarity.
I’m blinded by ideals, choked with emotion,
Distracted by attractions, with a strong fantasy notion.
2005
Published 8th Apr 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
8th Apr 2019 2:27am
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8th Apr 2019 5:21pm
Thank you... that's a much more insightful interpretation of what to me was just a momentary feeling, but what you say is so true.
10th Apr 2019 10:22pm
I like where Harleea went with it. I was thinking in terms of a yearning for something to believe in. Succinct yet evocative is a good combination.
Daniel
Daniel
11th Apr 2019 11:16pm
