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On an Elevator

first a look
and then a feeling
the smell of you
is so appealing

my heart beats fast
I know you're leaving
I am touched
beyond conceiving

rising up
the lift arriving
doors are opened
so alive in

this moment
our first meeting
I watch you walk
in time so fleeting

now I'm here
and I'm recalling
believing you are
also falling

speculating
hoping too
that I'll be
looking out for you
bcpoet
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