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veils are rising

veils are rising
I can see through the mist
loosening my grip
over life’s order.
I am no longer life’s commander.
I yield and surrender
to a gentler flow.
there is no more fear
the way ahead is clear.
Written by MonicaT
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Author's Note
Life has a flow of its own. Trying to control it leads to endless frustration. Letting go and learning to flow with life’s flow brings peace and harmony. We create and follow our dreams, and finally let the universe take charge. Then we can be satisfied with any outcome.
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