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[ UH ] [ NaPo 2019 ] Universe House VII

       
Tis a strange thing;     
witnessing Life's verse changing     
---lines and words rearranging      
     
subtractions here, additions there      
for sake of accommodating      
elaborate dreams dreamt by me      
unabated thoughts thought by you;      
     
collaborating      
into the late hour      
with mild to in-depth critiques      
suggesting subtle or drastic tweaks      
pursuant to perfection of a poem;      
     
building Universe House      
within the framework of  
All That Is      
     
Always and Forever      
this will be our      
home      
     
 
JohnnyBlaze
Written by JohnnyBlaze
Published | Edited 3rd Aug 2020
Author's Note
for Ahavati with Love 💜💑💋

for the Official DUP NaPo/GloProWriMo 2019 competition @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10707/
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