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Published 5th Apr 2019
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The author encourages honest critique.
7th Apr 2019 3:55am
Since you have asked for my thoughts as a writer of the Quatern, hear me from these words it is my honor to offer:
A beautiful, touching bouquet.
You have done yourself proud
In the artful way you phrase.
warm regards
Jade
A beautiful, touching bouquet.
You have done yourself proud
In the artful way you phrase.
warm regards
Jade
7th Apr 2019 4:13am
I deeply appreciate your thoughts on my work, Jade.
I am encouraged by your frank but positive assessment, to keep going at this as well as to explore other less travelled roads of poesy.
Sincerely
cab
I am encouraged by your frank but positive assessment, to keep going at this as well as to explore other less travelled roads of poesy.
Sincerely
cab
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7th Apr 2019 11:07am
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7th Apr 2019 4:07pm
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8th Apr 2019 4:20am
Ping pong, no. Sincerity is necessary on both sides, of which flattery is the villain.
I really appreciate -- and accept graciously -- your positive affirmation of my efforts. And I know you are being sincere.
A day ago, I complimented Tallen for delivering himself at his very best in recent times. He attributes his advance to you, of course!
I am thinking that I should dare to seek a collab with you as soon as you think you are ready for such a challenge. I have had an amazing one with Tallen. Don't know whether you've seen it (https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/341359-perhaps-to-dream-visual-version/).
Your work is wonderful, with high poetic energy.
Sincerely
cab
I really appreciate -- and accept graciously -- your positive affirmation of my efforts. And I know you are being sincere.
A day ago, I complimented Tallen for delivering himself at his very best in recent times. He attributes his advance to you, of course!
I am thinking that I should dare to seek a collab with you as soon as you think you are ready for such a challenge. I have had an amazing one with Tallen. Don't know whether you've seen it (https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/341359-perhaps-to-dream-visual-version/).
Your work is wonderful, with high poetic energy.
Sincerely
cab
