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Canoodling Skyward
Canoodling Skyward
(Five of 30 -- Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2019)
In fine astronaut form
I began the slow ascent
breathy brushing
upper wisps of tenderness
a gentle taste of You.
Soft pressure applied
to apex of the portal
hot breaths of wanton
lust and searing suns
of desire I press my rim
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting.
Plush pink flesh plays
a tag and tease of sorts
grasping, gasping
Skyward to frenzied
empyrean orgasmic
touch of creation
goaled to sizzling
lovers embraced in
lip-locked & strong
tender touching
tongues of the
Florentine Kiss
variety.
Again and again
I am Skyward bound
Enslaved to Your
Pearly whites
I salivate while i
penetrate Your
oral cavity until
we
are
out
of
breath.
_______________________
#NaPoWriMo2019
113 words
84 unique
(Five of 30 -- Official DUP NaPo/GloPoWrimo 2019)
In fine astronaut form
I began the slow ascent
breathy brushing
upper wisps of tenderness
a gentle taste of You.
Soft pressure applied
to apex of the portal
hot breaths of wanton
lust and searing suns
of desire I press my rim
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting.
Plush pink flesh plays
a tag and tease of sorts
grasping, gasping
Skyward to frenzied
empyrean orgasmic
touch of creation
goaled to sizzling
lovers embraced in
lip-locked & strong
tender touching
tongues of the
Florentine Kiss
variety.
Again and again
I am Skyward bound
Enslaved to Your
Pearly whites
I salivate while i
penetrate Your
oral cavity until
we
are
out
of
breath.
_______________________
#NaPoWriMo2019
113 words
84 unique
Published 5th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Sky_dancer challenged me with this spill -- a tasteful type of kiss between me and her
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5th Apr 2019 9:49am
5th Apr 2019 9:50am
Anonymous
5th Apr 2019 10:10am
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5th Apr 2019 10:12am
Really?! I know You said to hint at it but when i began it just kind of rolled and relate to Your pen name
You warm me with kind praise - thank You
You warm me with kind praise - thank You
Anonymous
5th Apr 2019 10:18am
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5th Apr 2019 10:22am
LOL - um, thank You
&
**psst, yeah no public readings because You know i am a shy backdrop type of poet**
Bad enough i put this in the Erotic theme
and You know how many reads that theme gets!
&
**psst, yeah no public readings because You know i am a shy backdrop type of poet**
Bad enough i put this in the Erotic theme
and You know how many reads that theme gets!
Anonymous
5th Apr 2019 10:26am
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LOL -- You made me laugh -- thank You
i don't think so ......not really. I believe most know i don't do erotic.
i don't think so ......not really. I believe most know i don't do erotic.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
5th Apr 2019 12:23pm
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5th Apr 2019 12:37pm
Anonymous
- Edited 5th Apr 2019 1:52pm
5th Apr 2019 1:51pm
Very nicely done! Sky_Dancer is inspiring some pretty amazing poetry from you. :-)
5th Apr 2019 2:07pm
5th Apr 2019 2:20pm
Well I found the alliteration to be breathtaking myself!
breathy brushing
searing suns
And so forth. There was such a lyrical quality to this, Tallen. It created its own music when read.
You're doing wonderfully in this challenge! We are truly impressed!
breathy brushing
searing suns
And so forth. There was such a lyrical quality to this, Tallen. It created its own music when read.
You're doing wonderfully in this challenge! We are truly impressed!
5th Apr 2019 2:34pm
5th Apr 2019 3:57pm
When I read the title I had a kind of feeling it was going to be a good 'un. And it is.
5th Apr 2019 4:18pm
5th Apr 2019 4:23pm
5th Apr 2019 4:35pm
Lots of Poets causing me to smile a lot today
and You are no different -- thank You
and for sharing with me
and You are no different -- thank You
and for sharing with me
5th Apr 2019 5:26pm
Your amazing metaphor has left me breathless, Tallen.
"I press my rim
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting" is just out of this world. It is, perhaps, antidotal to the caressing of tender flesh in which it cleverly disguises its oxymoronic irony.
I am seeing you at your best and counting here. And what a way to plateau, as in your last 5 spent words!
Sincerely
cab
"I press my rim
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting" is just out of this world. It is, perhaps, antidotal to the caressing of tender flesh in which it cleverly disguises its oxymoronic irony.
I am seeing you at your best and counting here. And what a way to plateau, as in your last 5 spent words!
Sincerely
cab
5th Apr 2019 7:17pm
aaaaah Brother if i am at my best it's because
Sky_dancer has become my muse (and much more)
thank You for the super comments
Sky_dancer has become my muse (and much more)
thank You for the super comments
5th Apr 2019 8:10pm
'I press my rim
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting.' Gosh this line was a corker. There's such flow here, you can really read you were focused and driven on your theme here. Grand job.
to Your brim and iron
with celestial melting.' Gosh this line was a corker. There's such flow here, you can really read you were focused and driven on your theme here. Grand job.
5th Apr 2019 9:25pm
um ........thank You (not certain what a corker is in this application but i'm thinking maybe a good thing)
Delighted to read Your comments and the kind share
Delighted to read Your comments and the kind share
5th Apr 2019 9:59pm
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Anonymous
13th Apr 2019 9:25pm
A very warming read, nice way to challenge the muse I guess. *smiles*
13th Apr 2019 9:50pm
no idea what my muse was expecting
when she laid down the challenge.
thank You for reading and sharing kind comments
when she laid down the challenge.
thank You for reading and sharing kind comments
