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Quite After the Storm
It’s quite now
rain dripping through the trees
Lighting has passed
thunder rumbles softly in the distance
It’s quite
after the storm
rain dripping through the trees
Lighting has passed
thunder rumbles softly in the distance
It’s quite
after the storm
Published 1st Apr 2019
Author's Note
Inspiration? A big old thunder storm passing thru a Louisiana bayou.
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1st Apr 2019 4:00pm
The word " Quite "
used in this spill, at first read, i thought it a misspell but thinking used as an adverb
this Brevity takes on a different meaning and now there's strength and extreme
buried withing.
(thank You for causing me to delve and think)
used in this spill, at first read, i thought it a misspell but thinking used as an adverb
this Brevity takes on a different meaning and now there's strength and extreme
buried withing.
(thank You for causing me to delve and think)
1st Apr 2019 9:54pm
You say your not a poet neither am I , I just write what I think as well...Good reads :-)
5th Apr 2019 4:49pm
