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A Silent Sun
A silent sun shone on as he locked flesh
In this - his tight embrace - he pushed in deep;
I lay, quite languidly; I'd almost lost
My sense of time, before I felt him reap
His victory, with all that centred need
Focused on thrusting in and pressing hard;
He gripped my flanks and built a certain speed;
Knowing he had my all, he'd not be barred
From any avenue he chose to fit
His girth to; he plunged proudly as he took
Ages to press within me, and his prick
Embedded in the tightest, wettest nook
That he had ever dreamed of, as he won
The right to spurt beneath that silent sun.
In this - his tight embrace - he pushed in deep;
I lay, quite languidly; I'd almost lost
My sense of time, before I felt him reap
His victory, with all that centred need
Focused on thrusting in and pressing hard;
He gripped my flanks and built a certain speed;
Knowing he had my all, he'd not be barred
From any avenue he chose to fit
His girth to; he plunged proudly as he took
Ages to press within me, and his prick
Embedded in the tightest, wettest nook
That he had ever dreamed of, as he won
The right to spurt beneath that silent sun.
Published 1st Apr 2019
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1st Apr 2019 3:39pm
2nd Apr 2019 4:23pm
It can be difficult to balance poetry form with sensuality and subtlety, but I begin to learn. Glad you enjoyed.
1st Apr 2019 3:56pm
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2019 3:56pm
Vivid depiction !!
2nd Apr 2019 6:41pm
Anonymous
2nd Apr 2019 7:39pm
That they do !!! 😘😜
2nd Apr 2019 11:15pm
And the angels too
one hopes though these spirits may
be quite dark indeed
one hopes though these spirits may
be quite dark indeed
1st Apr 2019 4:58pm
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